Tuesday, March 6, 2012

Observe my rap lyrics!?

Your currently at the stable

being hung with electrial cables

this could be a fable

but im playing with the devil at this poker table

betting my life for a record lable

beware for my self esteem is currently unstable

my skills conduct deadly chemical reactions for satisfaction

rap is my passion

dont push me

or youll be asking what happened

wheres the end?

wheres your friends?

take this diagnostic test over and over again

till the bleeding of your hands attends your body within

killing because of low self esteem

dealing coke aint a dream

its a dangerous buisness to be in

papajohn a.k.a dope fiend

my technique leave you vomitting and your skin bleading

leaving your organs fighting for feeling

aint a dream son...





-i aint done i just got tired of typing lolObserve my rap lyrics!?
your rap name is papajohn?....no comment

And scientist just wants to be polite because thats the way he wants people to react to his work.



PapaJohn, Your verse was unentertaining, basic ABC rhyme skills, and I can see how you want to make it look professional by throwing in a few big words. Case point, it sucks man. sorry, try again next year
pretty good from what ive seen before people posting up. You got potential keep doing what you doing.Observe my rap lyrics!?
I li ke the metaphors at the beginning. I'd say its raw.
hm, i like some of ya lines.
WOW...THAT WAS FANTASTIC. REALLY BEAUTIFUL LYRICS. I CAN SEE YOU IN THE MUSIC IN DUSTRY AS A FAMOUS SONG WRITER. PATIENCE AND PRACTICE WILL TAKE YOU A LONG WAY...
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